London, 1905 there was an old wrinkly man how was going on a camping trip to London.When he got there he heard a mysterious howling sound through the alleys and dark streets, through the high buildings.
Mr Dobson was very suspicious, scared and frightened of the noises he could hear in the distance. Through the mist he could see faint figures, moving in pairs. Were they ghosts? Mr Donson suddenly saw a sneak poak of the ghosts with its eyes bobbing up and down and the ghosts cold breath agents his wrinkled face stearing at the spookey ghost woman mistireous face.
Nice use of rhetorical questions. Always re-read your writing to check for errors. Can you see any missing apostrophes? Keep up the good work!
Hi Seth,
Nice piece of work, I like how spooky it is. You’ve used some good descriptive words here. Keep up the good work.