100WC: 04/11/2017

Latest Prompt

Here in the UK we are about to celebrate Bonfire Night, when the skies will be full of fireworks. We have also recently enjoyed the festival of Diwali, the Hindu celebration of light. So, with these events in mind, the prompt this time is a series of words.  They must all appear in your writing, but they can be in any order.

flame     swimming     celebrated     white     tomorrow

Why not have a go at putting some prepositions in your pieces this week? Help your readers see where your character or items are.

Isabelle

On Tuesday there was a boy upside down in a lake.This boy said he could see a underwater city with fish swimming around wearing clothes a local supermarket worker called Randy said ” I saw a boy and I know him he comes to my store when he walks home from school his name is Christopher but we call him Chris for short everyone knows him.”This boy has told everybody who live in the village and all of his family and friends .Only person dose not believe and that is his big sister  called Michelle she said ”#I really don’t believe him#.”So we are figuring out how this is happening.

Jaxon

FISHING WELL

Naughty man gets caught trying to steel all the money that people have thrown into the village wishing well lake.

Greedy Graham, a local villager, tied a magnet to the end of his fishing rod and went fishing for money. What Graham didn’t realise was how many coins were in the lake. He caught so many, that the weight of the coins pulled him into the lake and landed head first!

He was seen by a dog walker who rang the police. They got there right away and rescued Graham. He was left wishing he didn’t go fishing.

Seth

In St.Neots there’s has been a storm.A man,  somehow got stuck in a tiny puddle and he has has follen head first.You can only see his bright green wellies.We don’t know if he is still alive or dead.We have got the best and most expeirence people on the case.The police have got an idea how to get him out of the small puddle .Soon the weather will change and day will become night.The police are going to louse light so it will be harder to get the man out of the puddle.We are going to try to dig a hole.

Grace T.

Last Monday, a huge almighty storm came over to ST NEOTS, this has happened because of Global  Warming . ( global warming is when the plant gets hotter and hotter!) This storm has gone and done a lot of damage and has flooded quite a lot of houses a well! One man has been very upset because his unfortunate brother Joe was out in the horrific weather, when he fell in a huge puddle covering up the hard,  stony wet path. Joe is now being taken to the ST NEOTS hospital. We are keeping are fingers crossed that he recovers in hospital.

Elinor

Is fishing dangerous.

On Wednesday 18 October 2017 a man who was fishing quietly beside a lake near a car park had fallen in the cold, dirty  water. Later that morning a passer by saw this catastrophe, but the man had his feet sticking up out of the water. He was wearing green wellington  boots with some blue waterproof trousers. This has happened because he got pulled into the cold freezing water by an unidentified species of fish. We already have people researching the mysterious animal, we also have people thinking on how we can stop this happening again in this village.

Grace B.

STRANGE FIND IN LOCAL RIVER

Late last night on Tuesday 17th October 2017, police were called by a passerby with their dog, to a strange siting at the River Ouse. When they arrived and walked through the woods they couldn’t believe what they had found! There, in the middle of the shallow water, were a mans legs sticking out of the water still wearing his wellies!

After many hours off investigating the police found something. What they found was a man running away from the scene with a weapon in his hand. and he was the murder of the poor man!