Dear diary,
Today has been a tough first day back from holidays, a balloon popped and woke me from my sleep (that has never happened to me before). Also at school I got bulled by a boy with brown hair and a mischievous grin it was so frightening. Then I thought it was going to be alright so I sat in the corner of the class room at my desk and got on with my work. The bully who had been mean to me earlier looked at me weirdly and then kicked me. I really do hope tomorrow is better.
I really enjoyed your story. Keep the good work up!
i like it elizibeth
i love your one elizabeth. it takes me into a new world
you amazing keep it up