The boy named Harry is a smart child desperate to stay home alone. His mum and dad named Wayne and Alison are parents who never let there children stay home alone.So Harry when it was midnight he unlocked his door and rushed to his yellow bicycle. So his speeded to his cousins house and slept in the garden. In the morning his cousins warned him to bike back now! So Harry said “can i have breakfast ”
“yes”said his cousin so Harry greedily ate his breakfast.
Your writing has an interesting plot. At times, you writing contains small errors in tense or word choice. Always check your work before finishing!
Mr. M.
Bedfordshire, UK