One day I was in the cinema watching a movie called “Super dog saves the day from the evil robot”. The dog was wearing glasses that could see in the dark and shoot lasers! Today he was on his way to save a cat trapped in a tree, when suddenly he heard a loud noise. He looked over his shoulder and saw a giant robot shooting lasers at the citizens. He decides to wrap rope tightly around the robots legs, tug him to the ground and disarms him. The police came in their cars with flashing lights and screeching sirens.
I liked your use of adjectives. Emma
What an action packed story Luke! This made me think about if my own dog would be brave enough to take down a robot! Very clever idea for a story.
Well done Luke! Remember to show how exactly your story ends.🦊🐯
I liked your description . Layla
Amazing.Seth