It is sunny day. It is Saturday. Whole family is outside. Lucy is sitting by the lake with her dog Nasha. Sam is 10 years old. He is sitting on the boat and talking to Lucy. Aaron is 12 years old. He is fishing. Layla and Alex are twins. They like to play on a green grass. Dad is very busy. Mum is holding little Taylor. Everyboy Like to live in the house.
Hello Tina!
How lovely to see your work on 5 Sentence Challenge.
You have chosen some great things to write about.
Next time perhaps you can link some of them so that they are a little bit longer and you only have 5.
Well done again!
Tina,you have done a good job in using capital letters and full stops for your sentences. Try next time to try to make some of your short sentences into one longer one.
I like the names you gave the people in the picture but I did wonder if Nasha is very scary?
Well done !